Peacocks
Multi Clause Sentence Paragraphs
Congratulations to all of the children who completed additional learning about multi-clause sentences. Here are some of their examples, with the fewest errors. Wonderful!
‘Here students achieve personal bests and success again and again, Because they strive to know they will receive their hard earned rewards.’
‘My last personal success was achieved in this room and the owner of the building helped me to strive, again, the owner helped me to receive a medal here on the exact spot, their face (the owner’s face), lit up, because they were proud of me, now you know what this room meant to me.’
‘In the past three months, here in peacock class, we have been successfully (well, hopefully) striving to construct our own stories, you know me personally, you will know this is the best project for me, because at home I write stories again and again, my parents say this is their favourite story I’ve written, now I look forward to receiving feedback from Mr Murphy to see if I’ve reached his expectations.’
